Ok, on account of the fact we now seem to be discussing plot sensitive material, I've removed all the comments from the last post. I have reposted it, along with all your lovely comments as a friends only thing, so that only us 5 can see it. The reason is that people like Jaesai and Macross are potential readers, and I don't want to ruin anything for them.
The reposted entry can be found in your friends page.
All the best, Jon